Sunday, 29 October 2017

The new class room


I hear the SWISH swash as the builder brushes the building. 
I hear a saw or something sharpening. 
The building looks like a tangle of wool.
I hear a CLUNK CLUNK!!! as the hammer puts nails in. 
There are loads of different sounds like layers.
The sounds when he hammers it echos. 
The building kinda looks like a wooden maze. 
I also see the builder painting the building softly and nicely. 
As the builders hammer I feel the dust swish past my face.
BANG goes the hammer. 
Sometimes when they stop hammering .
Our new classroom.


W.A.L.T 
Use interesting words to describe.
The word I like best in my poem is SWISH swash.
word I really liked in Stella  poem was I hear the nail gun banging on the walls like fireworks.



 




 




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