Wednesday, 8 November 2017

Procedural writing + measurement


This procedure could be improved by makeing the instructions clearer.
Something I did well was was on how to make the heart.
Some I could improve on is measuring the paper.

What I’ve done this year!


Sunday, 29 October 2017

The new class room


I hear the SWISH swash as the builder brushes the building. 
I hear a saw or something sharpening. 
The building looks like a tangle of wool.
I hear a CLUNK CLUNK!!! as the hammer puts nails in. 
There are loads of different sounds like layers.
The sounds when he hammers it echos. 
The building kinda looks like a wooden maze. 
I also see the builder painting the building softly and nicely. 
As the builders hammer I feel the dust swish past my face.
BANG goes the hammer. 
Sometimes when they stop hammering .
Our new classroom.


W.A.L.T 
Use interesting words to describe.
The word I like best in my poem is SWISH swash.
word I really liked in Stella  poem was I hear the nail gun banging on the walls like fireworks.



 




 




Wednesday, 27 September 2017

Maths knowledge.


In my maths knowledge I am in the stage six group. My knowledge teacher is Mrs Wilburn.
I am good at 100 X tables.
I am working on my fractions.